V.S Knife

My knife challenged me to a game of chicken after i popped the last of my Riddlein

in the corner fiddling with my pen thinking in riddles then 

slice slice goes the knife

oh what a f*****g mess, you gada be kidding

god damn blade always purposely missing

veins right there, away hes chipping

till he exposes it bare, old scars just re ripping

i wish he would get to the point, im living on the edge

the edge im reliving, the point im re-wishing

its not a game of chance, its supposed to be the last mission

shallow slash or a real close gash, only cry for attention 

Reviews

[silent poet]

Curiously reading this numerous times like hmmmmm.. It's a wonderfully written poem. Suicide, cry for attention would of been a dead lock title. Every word of this is superb. But still just curiously reading like hmmmmm. Either way I honestly love the beat and feel of this. Shows your many gifts with words and writing.

Pardon me,

[BLitZeD]

thanks, i dont cut myself if thats the hmmm question lol. i read like 3 others from today about ppl cutting n thought f**k it ya know

[silent poet]

Lol hmmmmm.. Joking. As I stated tho love it. More so was wondering about your thoughts. Not the ACT itself. Great writer's make you think. Is all

[BLitZeD]

the knife is its own character, abusive in nature

[silent poet]

Understood.. I figured that much with HOW you delivered your first line MY KNIFE challenged me.. Carry on professor., I'm just a mere student, that likes and appreciates your work.

[BLitZeD]

lmfao, flattered