Pick A Phrase

yea about that lol

"Spinning, spinning, always spinning," 

"Tiling my head to see the world straight."

"Watch me fall apart"

"I can't get me out of my mind"

Great...

Reviews

[Red3Bravo]

Clever, sort of like found poetry. Cool how you managed to drag them into a coherent thought process, especially the first stanza. Nifty.

[silent poet]

short, simple but definitely great! I relate,

[BLitZeD]

it was a pick a phrase contest. i picked all 4 and added in the word great :/ i shoulda f****n won lol

[silent poet]

lmao smh... only you!

[ANTO]

I completely got the feeling of well-being controlled like slot machine reels here - only a winning line (a phrase) makes sense of the world and provides temporary relief - otherwise its 'spin-again-time" making the narrator frustrated and sick of the motion sickness.
Class and unorthodox Blitzed. right up my street my friend. Cool layout.