BroadSword

It's like another dimension. 

Hell on Earth, a never ending detention.

A list of regrets that hide un-mentioned, 

On the other side lies judgement and misconceptions.

A grudge meant to end a juggernaut in a swift kick, f*****g relentless.

So I stand here and willingly except my penance.

To gain back my independence.

Your witnessing the serving of a life sentence.

To the pure it seems senseless, but their eyes are closed, 

When I said third eye blind I meant this. 

Reality is what you perceive to be real 

When a soul is lost you grieve to feel healed.

Justice for all weather its a OD or put down by the steal, 

 Its just a part of life, your shark is my eel. 

Your king is your kneel 

Your god is your shield

Two hands on my sword, 

Life's a broad deal.

Reviews

[Raven]

nice,it was enjoyable to read.you have a way with words.

[V.L.Mir]

Marvelous! You shed light to a topic so deep. Noteworthy, keep it up!

[E G TEN]

The Broadsword of a wordsmith, wel I'll be damn! There's a lot of punches here and theree
That speak for themselves, all in all a cool short piece. Mr Blitzed, Thanks EG

[BlaqkShadow]

Excellent, more moar! Love the theme as usual :D X

[Terrence Chang]

Quite a great piece you got there. Keep it up

[BLitZeD]

thanks bro, quick little piece here. glad you enjoyed it

[Terrence Chang]

I definitely enjoyed it

[dan]

Aah, haven't read you in a while. This piece has such power and an easy flow that it drips from my mind straight to my soul. You seem to invoke god a lot, in a very ambiguous way...never preachy or holier-than-thou...just the RIGHT touch. I'm not religious but also have a spiritual bent in my writing. You haven't lost your talent or touch, BLitZeD. Very nicely done! take care...dan

[BLitZeD]

thanks man, yea been going through some s**t , havent written much, plus my hard drive crashed so yea its been a while. i posted a few things recently, nothing of significance tho. got a bunch of unfinished stuff on a skeleton page, ill probly be adding to blitzed saga later tonight. good hearing from ya.

p.s. a two handed sword leaves no room for a shield