Help Me

Help Me

 

So many emotions run through my mind,

A thousand different ways to handle the pain.

I'm not exactly sure who to turn to.

Who can I talk to without completely spilling my guts?

Who can I trust enough to distract me...

Without really caring about me?

I'm Trusted, but untrusting, Dependable, but independent

Wait...?

Am I overreacting?

I'm so confused!

Somebody help me please!

I want a hand to hold.

Author's Note

Like i said, i'm not tht great a writer, but i think i like this one. sorry if there r any spelling errors. tht's not exactly my strong point.

Reviews

[Heidi Hallucination]

I LUV IT KAY

[smiggle wiggle]

Kristin! You DO NOT suck! You can't say you suck because in poetry there are no rules! you can do whatever you want! GREAT JOB! :)

[maiarusm]

Confused and helpless are the dominant emotions in this piece. You shouldn't downplay your own talents, not many people can actually write with emotions. The pieces themselves don't have to be with great spelling, although yes it helps... especially to convey the message, if you have the emotion and/or the imagery you wish to share in it. By the way, I like this one too.