the future

barefoot.

on a cool, rough surface

one path, way

no suitcase, baggage.

freedom

 

darkness.

only a shining, slivered moon

one arrow, compass for all

no directions, maps.

God's pointing finger

 

unknown.

just me searching, wondering

one person waiting, hoping

no knowing, feeling.

the future

 

I just follow the path.

free

with God's pointing finger

to

 

 the future.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Debbie_Philly]

Beautiful !!! I really loved this piece... great imagery :)

[Tim Piotrowicz]

I see it too. God's guidance is so necessary. No suitcases needed :D I liked this poem.

[Megan]

No emotional baggage either! And thank you! :)