Couples

Peter Pan has Wendy;

Romeo has Juliet;

Clyde has Bonnie;

But why can’t you have me as your other half?

Why am I just tinkerbell in your Peter Pan and Wendy love story?

Reviews

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

Good use of allusions there- Peter Pan and Wendy, Romeo and Juliet, Clyde and Bonnie. And comparing yourself to Tinkerbell- the fairy- is not bad too. It is a short poem and is clear-cut. I think you can choose much better themes and write on them as well.