Who Will Miss Me?

Poem i randomly made up.

Who will miss me,

If I fall?

On top of this bridge,

Which stands so tall.

Who will miss me,

If I hang?

Dangling from this rope,

Brings a Bitter-Sweet tang.

Who will miss me,

If I cut too deep?

My blood pools around me,

As I fall forever asleep.

Who will miss me,

If I die?

I'll end this suffering,

And in heaven, I'll fly.

But,

Who will miss me?

I didn't do this for fun.

After, will I smile, or ask,

"What have I done?"

Author's Note

Not my best work, but still, tell me if you liked!

Reviews

[M.Kilani]

great question you have in here, it has been always my concern, the way you ended the poem holds the answer to it. great piece ... well done.

[Kaylor Mason]

I liked this. I ask myself this question quite often.

[13ReasonsWhy]

oh my gosh!!! I love it!! this is totally going into my favorites!!!! absolutely astounding!

[KittyStarr1101]

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Really good.

[TheKaylaPup]

I really like the emotion in this, I find emotion to be very important in poetry, and you did a wonderful job with it here. I'm sure many many people would miss you, I barely know you and I would miss you. I do have to put in my constructive criticism though, from writer to writer and I hope you can appreciate that. The rhythm and flow of this one could be improved, it isn't bad, but it could be better.

[Loney tunes]

such fine fist

[Chelsea]

I love the emotion! I love that you're writing about this and not actually going through with it... but ya know, if you ever need a stranger to talk to, I'm here(: great write!

[HopelessDreamer]

I love your emotion in this poem. It shows your in pain and want to express it. I know myself what that feels like to want to die and wonder if anyone will miss you so i find this amazing.

[Aka.Hipster]

I love all emotion in this! I love your choice of words. Keep writing! I cant wait to read more