Mistakes

A Poem by blueeyeddevel

You were a mistake

My words

You were a mistake

My choices

You were an idea

My life

You were the ending

My love

You were the beginning

My love

You are the ash of my past

My whole being

You are my future

My thought

My hate

My fear

My mind

My soul

My regrets

My determinations

My theories

I am who I am

© 2011 blueeyeddevel

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rowan.taylorrr

i really like the repetitive state of this. i love the whole piece itself, great work:)

Posted 8 Years Ago

deeps

Like the flat out honesty in this.
This is wonderful.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on August 1, 2011
Last Updated on August 1, 2011

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blueeyeddevel

Inverness , FL

About

2011 was the last time that I have been on here. I gave up on writing in 2011, and I think I'm trying to reignite my passion for this hobby. Its the only thing that's cheap for a hobby these days. S.. more..