Alone we fell into this place

Written Aug, 16 2008

Alone we fell into this crazy place...

 

Alone we fell into this place, and we were scared. We were petrified; we didn’t know what this world was? We didn't know that this world was scary; we didn't know that this world was so fragile. This world we surround are self’s in, just takes a crazy toll upon are self’s, but then it happens, A thing that fades that all away, makes you not want to blink, makes you not want to believe it sometimes, but its theirs, holy s**t it is there. Together you don't fear all of this, together you are no longer scared, and together you can take anything on. Together is how you will leave this place. A simple plan can change everything..........

Reviews

[Megan]

This is so true..having someone there, whether it be just a friend or a spouse makes life so much easy to bear..it makes things worth while because you have someone there to encourage you and bring you up when you're down. You also have someone there to enjoy all the beautiful moments with :) and that's the amazing part. I loved reading this and I loved how right it is..I could really understand and feel what you were saying. Great job!

[Luscious Leigh (Leslie ..]

I love the holy s**t moments, they seem to blow open the eyes and heart to what is real. And what will last. Great write.

[Ruth]

When we have someone to face the demons then all can fade away...literally...I adore the freestyle to this piece! xx

[Silent Serenity also kn..]

First of all you are not a horrible poet! I truly feel you have great talent!
People feel that all poems should have a catch, a rhyme, a flow to it but honestly poetry is what you feel....what you think...what you imagine, things like that! No technique is required for poetry & I for one enjoyed this tremendously!

You took me along with you! You have pointed out that when your alone things can be so unpredictable, so scary, so alone! Yet when you are with someone anything is possible! The journey may be scary but together you can accomplish the fears!

Again awesome write! :)

[blueeyeddevel]

That's the way the world works. Its a miserable place. But with someone, it's just beautiful. As long as its with someone that you love.

[DeletedUser]

This is quite inspiring. You took a miserable place, and then, in a heartbeat, showed that it could be beautiful.