STOP.

sorry about this poem, but i had to let it out. WARNING: STRONG LANGUAGE.

STOP CHANGING

they say... it won't last

well, maybe it won't

but you are not the one

he thinks you are

i will not sit here any longer

and stare as you

fulfill your wishes

YOU DO NOT F*****G LOVE HIM

or at least he does not love you

all of my words written

no, scribbled

on this paper

scream out the truth

you are NOT IN LOVE THIS YOUNG

i'm sick of your S**T

and i'm sick of your FITS

of rage, FITS of grief

after a little over a month

why are you so hard to hold on to?

well, i know now

who you really are

you can just LEAVE ME HERE

if you want to --

oh, wait

you already did

i'm tired of his g a m e s

i'm tired of the w a y 

you look him in the e y e s 

f**k all four of your l i e s

no, they're not even y o u r s 

truth is, they n e v e r  w e r e

so i'm leaving you alone

you want to fix this?  no, you 

W O N ' T 

because i know you well enough

tomorrow

i'll 

      be

            gone

Author's Note

written for one of my "friends" who has been kinda pissing me off lately with her romance-related bullshit. alright, choose him over me, then.

so, yes. sorry about this poem.

Reviews

[r]

Oh, I know how that is. Guys make girls crazy. They forget everyone else.

The font is really pretty, by the by.

But, aherm, anyway. Yeah. That sucks. And then when he's gone or whatever, they come runnin' back to you, sobbing about it all and yada yada yada. I kind of did that before. Not exactly. But kind of, minus the sobbing. 8D. I guess when you're this young, you think that love'll last forever, but the truth is when you're this young it's mostly just motherfucking hormones. Of course, I knew better, because I'm so spectacularly smart (no, really, I am a genius 8D), but yah.

Sorry to hear it.

Don't be sorry about the poem! Let it all out! Scream and shout! Have no doubts!

Yash, no more rhyming.

'Bye now.

Love you.

No homo.

Ciao.

[Thomas Skahill]

I think this would be cool as a preformance, sort of DADA project. Have you thought about just randomly distributing these places and seeing if it shakes things up?

[lee von cleef]

A new penny
found a new Penny,
Wishing for a month,
a name ,
June ,April, May
A hot rainy windy girl name
Penny too.....

[astronaut]

I love this and use of fonts. Glorious.

[Shaunna Harper]

There's a lot of aggression and force and hurt here, and you put it across very well - the fonts help!

[minisla]

Oh the joys of friendship. I understand totally

[justjenn_2u]

I love the rant and you keep it pumping out. I love the formatting as it drew me in. I love the raw honesty so the free write is perfect. Keep going.

[wendyemma32]

I think this is awesome ... Who cares about the language ? Its your feelings let it out ... I love it :)

[GunMetal]

I can't tell you how satisfying your intensity is. I had to unclench my knuckles after reading this. Many readers can relate to this on a personal level, which is what makes this so effective. It's the raw emotion of it all. Unfiltered vinegar.

[Kathryn]

Wow, love what you did with the fonts. It really made a difference when I read it. It felt like you just poured the words from your heart, and they are angry and hurt. I'm sorry for what you are going through, because this poem showed me how you feel, I can kind of understand.

[Laura Maidah]

It's aesthetically lovely. Well thought out. Wonderful poem. Very in your face tone. Pacing? No issues. Meter varies. No rhyme. Overall, great read.