just a walk

this walk filled with irate curiosity 

stomping innocent leaves

i question this world,

     humanity.

we judge without guilt

only then conforming

     to belong.

this walk…is my world.

reality.

Author's Note

thoughts?

Reviews

[MOON]

Strong imagery. Lovely write

[Leslie Philibert]

Good poem with vivid first images, visual and the kind of picture you acknowledge
right away as truth, this poem extracts a lot of energy from a small picture, turning
it into a big pictute..

[.]

An interesting and lovable walk! 100/100 :D

[Dayran]

Sounds like an enjoyable walk.

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... exquisite poetry... i try very hard to not judge... but i'm human... and to err is human... my "walk" is the poetry i attempt to write... it's "my world" and i cherish it like i would cherish a dream...