utopia

that expedition

in which meaning told truth,

paths offered only fulfillment,

unsinkable confidence aroused,

and all expectations ceased.

that expedition 

plunged

for an unfathomable journey

Reviews

[...]

Utopia...hmmm. A deep sea dive or a celestial flight?

[Emily B]

well crafted

[Enigma]

Wow. Thought-provoking and well-crafted. Bravo!

[Joshua]

Amazingly beautiful writing.

[K.C. Zbryk]

For its brevity this piece has a very profound depth to it. Wonderful work here and i think this is amazing. Great job!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Rich in depth and meaning, well done!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Not bad. A excellent existential musing.

[Dayran]

No doubt that expedition was originally vast and it wants you to discover more of what it is. A straightforward telling of an experience that most can't even begin to. Great write!

[...]

. this expedition into utopia is enriching ...
. to me, the reader, it speaks more about how unattainable utopia is ...
. but i guess it's open to interpretation ...