a brief serenity

crisp sounds forming

  through the hushed leaves.

gentle songs outlining

  the silent language among game.

change of color emerging

  over this existence. 

a moment of old rapture. . 

repeatSs

Author's Note

hm, thoughts? ideas?

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

Quiet reflective poem, nice work.

[Poetic Beauty]

Ahh those moments of repeated old raptures. The best lovers are the ones we know and giving and taking in pleasure but then again there is something truly desirous about a new adventure in love as well. I like the thought poured into this piece.

[Mercelus]

interesting use of the change of seasons to describe a past moment of bliss.
very nicely done.

[MOON]

Lovely words conveying an inner peace .

[Dayran]

Change at a very subtle place, caught in a mood of the moment. Lovely! You may be starting to move in new ways.

[cartera]

Poetic observations brought to us by the poet. that's what poetry is for, amongst other things.
ATB
Alex.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Such peaceful thoughts... you took me to a place of serenity. Thank you. :)

[Lily Mae]

I really like this.. you use the word crisp and that's the feeling I took with me during the rest of the read.. I loved it..xo

[Light and ashes]

Oh this is so magnificent. You have captured bliss and serenity in such brevity, BRAVO!