limitations

existential limitations

    for this is reality.

importance always unfolding

though stuck here, confined.

yet a purpose is brought

to perceive as we 

                            ought.

Author's Note

its short but it was a passing thought i had to write.
opinions?

Reviews

[Enigma]

Reminded me (somehow) of 'Waiting For Godot' by Samuel Beckett. Brilliant ending lines. Kudos!

[.]

My fav sentence :
yet a purpose is brought
to perceive as we
ought.
Great poem!

[Poetic Beauty]

There ate thing we must do things we should do and thing that we want to so but many times the first two.make us feel stuck or unhappy

[Kes]

The first line alone sucked me in. That this poem can be so short, and yet so profound, is very impressive.
Keep up the hard work!
K

[Lily Mae]

I feel like a bird with broken wings as I read this.. an on looker to the events in life but for now not in a bad way but in a way that says..it's ok to observe, gather and grow.. excellent :) x

[cartera]

Second line throws me a bit.
I'll have to think about this one.
ATB
Alex.

[Katrina Mckeown]

nice flow, philosophical and well structred poem.

[Lydia]

Love it!

[Wondering Mind]

This is like a mathematical formula in words. Pure logic.