how i feel for you

words of love

 

as tears run down your face
you know I am there to wipe them away
as you hold closer I hold you tight never letting you away
I will talk to you ,I will even sing
I will dance for you
I will play the clown just for
and you laugh,laugh my love
I just want to wipe them tears away
will do anything just for you for
I will build us castles and dreams and hopes
though holding loose in the air ,our love will hold them strong
so they are always there
I will fight the world for you
I will pave the way under your feet
I will do as no one done for my love
I will do the strangest things for my love
mock me as you like ,never care
I will always do it for my love
I will do wonders ,I will travel the world just for you
my love
I will forever want you happy
even if in a dreamy world just for us
that will be just enough for me
if you were in it

Author's Note

i reviewed a writing i was touched so i wrote this

Reviews

[Althea Tremaine]

This is beautiful. You have a certain voice, even in your reviews, which is a sign that you're in touch with your inner self. Inspiration is always hard to find, but in your case, it seems to have planted a seed that grew into a lovely patch of emotion.

Apart from a few grammatical and punctuation touch-ups, you have a wonderful poem in your hands.

[Celtic Cat]

awwwwww. So you ARE a poet, aren't you? lol I like this!!! Ah.... inspiration. gotta love it when it hits you right!! Great sentiment, my friend!!

[O!]

Thats nice that u were inspired to write this coz of something u read.

The sentiments are real nice....does need quite a bit of touching up...but it looks like its another quickly written write from u!! hehe...even u beat me in speed now!..haha

btw...sometimes its good to be a lil selfish in love.

x,
O!