You will be remembered..

one of my best heroes in history, that beautiful lady..Joan D Arc.. said she heard the angels telling her how to liberate her country France from the British.. won many battles,all wanted her dead

she was a pretty young lady..wanted to see her land free
she gathered some followers and headed for the king.. your highness i could help restore your throne
and rid our France from all the Brits..she told she heard voices of angels telling showing her the way
she directed them to follow..its in my hands your liberty..the clergy of France saw her as a threat
and so they united with the enemies just to see her dead ..accused her of madness and then as
someone without faith ..pretending she was a saint was against the the church and the ways of God
she ran battles and won a lot ..she was the talk of whole of France..both the french and the Brits ,
decided for a trial to be arranged and execute a lovely soul full of light and belief,she was just
they all lied and for their devious ways she fought,but again the dark was stronger than light
they put her on trial..and with devilish plan they sent her to the gallows
she was to be burnt..she climbed to see her fate all people gathered
her enemies wanted to see her beg for forgiveness
but till she reached up there she was smiling defiant ,and all so beautiful
as the fire reached to her ,one of the people standing ,went out of his mind ,he swore he saw her
smiling and all happy as she was dying..your legend will never be forgot
Joan D Arc..you will be remembered like a brave shining knight
in a darkness you and you likes only could break,for us at last to see the light.

Author's Note

this is a brief of the story of one of the great figures of history

Reviews

[Looouise]

I think this is better suited as a poem. You've formatted it as such, and you've used punctuation as it would be used in poetry. If you were wanting to make it a story, it might be better to edit the whole thing into a story format, correct punctuation and proof reading - because there are a few places where you've used words where they don't need to be.

[Goodbye]

She is an amazingly strong woman of unquestionable, beautiful faith, and your ode to her is quite lovely!

[Alicante lullaby]

People like her defeat death thus becoming immortals.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Gorgeous...my mother's name is Joanna as we call Joan in Polish...this reminds me of her character...but yes, perhaps it is more poetic in both form and air :) I too, love Joan D' Arc