our voices will be landmarks

brevity, vignettes

i.

a silence
stiff as religion
settles in the car

the road becomes time
before a sinking red sun


ii.

we give our apologies  
to the horizon

Reviews

[Trevor Jay Bloodworth]

"The road becomes time/before a sinking red sun". Creative lines, I liked these the best. The title is interesting too.

[blueviolin]

thank you!