blind

This is a very strong poem and It is about getting taken advantage of.

How could I be so blind to not be able to see

that what he did to me was wrong.

He handled me in uncomfortable places

and it happened over and over again.

He broke me in so many different ways

that I cannot possibly retrieve all of the pieces.

He broke me and now I have to start from scratch

to mend all the hurt and discomfort.

He is disgusting and I HATE HIM

 

 

Author's Note

I am sorry if this may be a little stronger than intended

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Your emotional expression is powerful. You convey so well what everyone has felt at one time or another. To soften the imagery would only coat the pain in unnatural color. Well done!

[Erin Phoenix]

I like it. Good job. C: