I finally forgave

He hurt me so much but in the end it all makes sense to me.

I've finally forgiven the one who hurt me the most

In trust that this was the last time.

Cause the days will go on

and my wounds will continue to heal

and I know that letting him back in

will hurt

and I will be untrusting,

but babysteps, are what i'm taking.

I mean well

and i'm taking a risk

but praying that this is the risk worth taking.

But please be patient with me

as I have been patient with you

because I no that somehow

you will prove

that you were worth it.

 

Author's Note

to me this is perfect becuause this is the poem and the feelings that I needed to heal

Reviews

[Michael Guccione]

I hope this works for you.

[Sandra K]

Lovely! Want a romantic plan you have. If he is smart, he will follow you. : D

[Phil & Bren's Colla..]

Very well written. Beautifully penned. Great job.

[Tai Chi Italy Take Two]

I hate to tell you this kaitlyn but if he cheated on you, he probably will again. It's a man thing! lol but, if it is a love thing and he hurt your feelings indelicately, then love is worth trying again for, over and over again infact. As your footnote states, forgiving has a two way beneficial affect too, but don't be gullible, is my advice! I still am naturally, having lived a sheltered life before singlehood. there is a typo in there somewhere, 3rd from last line. 'know'. LLB

[Evil_Angel]

Really nice work, I think writing really helps us get through the tough things in life. I like how you used the different colors for different feelings thats really cool, and i think its great how you can write your thoughts so clearly. Great job :)

[Str8jacket]

I love it. I had a similar poem on here but I got mad and deleted it. Keep up the good work.