Her Suicide

I had a dream that I saw my friend hang herself... very short.

I saw her there like a marionette. 

Alone on an empty stage

Hanging. Dangling. 

Limp.

Her puppeteer grown up,

Lost interest in wooden dolls.

 

 

Author's Note

I don't usually write poetry. But please tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Tessa]

I think it says exactly what needs to be said in exactly the amount of lines you used. It's beautiful.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Thats good, painful poem
Yos