So Cruel

So Cruel

A Poem by Brandon Mathis

If you need a place to fall

I’m right here

Have no fear

I’m not going anywhere

I will wipe away all of your tears

So you don’t have to be scared

I will be the one to answer the calls

 

All I can think about is you and me

Our hands touch

And I feel so alive

But when you’re not here

It starts killing me on the inside

And then my heart starts to bleed

 

It only hurts when you’re not around

It’s so silent

The dead of night

All you can see are the tears in my eyes

Maybe if I disappear

So might all of my fears

 

There’s still time to turn this around

I will still catch you if you fall

I will answer all of your calls

But our love can’t be found

But maybe in the next life

You might feel just as alive

 

Because you left me broken down

With-out any love I will drown

I feel like a helpless fool

But what will I do with-out you

How could you be so cruel?

© 2012 Brandon Mathis


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this such a great poem...imbued with such heavy emotions....the very first and the second last stanza is very promising....the second stanza talks of sincere love.the third stanza is very much mournful.......and the last stanza expresses a trifle aggression.and despair..such a nice work....keep it up.....

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brandon Mathis

13 Years Ago

thank you very much i will always keep writing till there is no life left in me



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this such a great poem...imbued with such heavy emotions....the very first and the second last stanza is very promising....the second stanza talks of sincere love.the third stanza is very much mournful.......and the last stanza expresses a trifle aggression.and despair..such a nice work....keep it up.....

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brandon Mathis

13 Years Ago

thank you very much i will always keep writing till there is no life left in me
oh wow. This poem dances back forth between love and hate. The ending just rings with sadness and anger. Very nicely done ^_^

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brandon Mathis

13 Years Ago

thank you very much for the review
Brandon Mathis

13 Years Ago

thank you very much

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Brandon Mathis
Brandon Mathis

Washington, MO



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I love to write poems!!!!!! more..