Deserted

You left me here

You left me here to fear

You say no more tears

You are saying it all so clear

The windows turn to mirrors

And you are deserting me here

 

Your face flashes in my eyes

I’m holding my own ashes,

As I begin to cry

You close my eyes,

 So that you can run and hide

 

Why did you have to leave me all alone?

When will you be coming home?

With all this pain I don’t know how to cope

You deserted me with every piece to my life

Ran out the door with my soul in your eyes

I have been abraded and left here to die

 

You left me broken and torn apart

As I wait here for you to return my heart

I still try to carry on

But when my life is dead and gone

Every day is like a chess match

And I look into your eyes

And it’s a reflection of me holding my own ashes

 

As I begin to cry,

You close my eyes,

So that you can run and hide

The burning ember of no more life

To my surprise you never wanted to desert me

You only wanted to hurt me

Reviews

[BorealPoet]

Once again a fantastic work! Very depressing. Thanks for bearing with me on the delay on reviews my friend!

[Brandon Mathis]

I'm impressed that my work is fantastic you thank you

[Serenity Faith]

This is such a depressing piece. As always you have a strong finish, I like that about your work. Maybe it's just me, but there do seem to be a few repetitive lines. Other than that, wonderful. ^_^

[Brandon Mathis]

I try not to be so repetitive.

[The dark story]

this is such a depressing poem...full of emotions.your works is really very enthralling,you know...........i liked each and every line of this poem..

[Brandon Mathis]

i'm honored