Taking Smiles for Granted

Another Trimeric Poem!!

I’ll never forget that smile

The way you told me

I always loved that way

I know I never want you to go

 

The way you told me

That you will always love me

Did I take it for granted?

 

I will always love that way

I’ll never forget the words that you say

May I have one last dance?

 

I know I never want you to go

I don’t want to be left alone

Give me one last chance

Reviews

[emilythestrange]

FAb

[kublakhan27]

Oh...I relate to this one big-time, but I'm sure I'm not alone in that regard...there is no greater feeling of despair than being on the verge of losing a lover/partner under the circumstances you've presented here...

[quixotic_rose]

AWE this is so adorable and incredibly sweet. simple yet realistic in its ways. Its all about giving out that chance and having the other person take it. good work :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Lovely poem:) so vulnerable, well done