Resurrection

Try to remind me most

Of that what hurts the least

So pardon me while I burn

Because this life won’t be the same

 

Of that what hurts the least

Take it all away

Burning it down inside of me

And leave it there with the shame

 

Take it all away

But leave me behind

Maybe I’ll resurrect through the flames

Or just close my eyes

 

Because this life won’t be the same

I try to remember you

I don’t have the patience to wait

So the memories I burn straight through

Reviews

[emilythestrange]

" So pardon me while I burn" .
Sad and amusing.
The perfect combination..

Smiles are awesome,
:D

[Erika Jones]

This is sad in my opinion :c but I love it anyway!

[quixotic_rose]

I can relate to this so well in life right now its ridiculous. seriously, go ahead and write out my life story with that one. Getting through the pain is the worst, but I try "to burn straight through the memories" of it. well done :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Such a sad poem about loss and trying to move on through a lot of pain. Very well done indeed!
God bless

[TheJordBaker]

definitely like this style. it makes your statements seem bolder and more meaningful. great write.

[Brandon Mathis]

the style is called Pantoum you should try it's really fun to use and i'm glad that you like my work!!!

[Serenity Faith]

Excellent Brandon! Another great write. You've really caught on to your own thing. This piece held such a deep meaning. I love it. ^_^

[Brandon Mathis]

Thank you i know i have been using Pantoum style and trimeric poetry checking more out as we speek. have you checked out the new ones

[Brandon Mathis]

the one called let them know is a mixture of pantoum and trimeric check it out