Set Me Free

Set me free

Let me breath

All on my own

I can find my way back home

My soul shines like gold

So set me free

Let me breath

Stop choking me

 

I scream

Why do you do this to me?

Again and again you make me bleed

So much hate for the way you treat me

Set me free

Let me breath

Stop choking me

 

Just let me go

Let me shine like gold

I want to go back home

Cause you leave me here all alone

So set me free

Let me breath

Stop choking me

 

For my sake

I have so much hate

So much that I can blame

So many regrets

So much shame

Who knew you were like the rest

Please set me free

Please let me breath

Please stop choking me

And let go of me

Reviews

[Pax]

its seems like freedom is hard to achieved...like it always does...be strong..and do what it takes to be free...and lastly let the baggage free..
great write.

[khalid]

very nice in all aspects, shape, meaning and language. i like the image as well.

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you

[afra]

Great poem ....i love it

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you

[kublakhan27]

Nice work...this would fit well into a song I think^^

[Brandon Mathis]

most of my poems i write for music but i can't sing all that well but i can play guitar so that is a plus thank you for the comment tho

[Crimson Bayonet]

Great poem. Amazing job :)

[Brandon Mathis]

thank u

[Crimson Bayonet]

You're welcome :D