Sharp Edges

overcoming anger in my way

The blood rushes to my brain

I think I might break

I guess that you can say

That I’ve had a bad day

But my anger still remains

 

Everything that I do is wrong

My self-esteem has gone

I just hope that I can hold on

I hope that I can be strong

As I watch and wait for dawn

I hope that my strength will help me along

 

I’m drowning in my own thoughts

Remembering the memories

That I thought had gone

I walk this lonely street

The only way to clear my mind

And to make myself feel free

But anger is my worst disease

 

I hope that faith finds me before I drown

The words I speak come out as a frown

You think you’re the king

Because you wear that crown

When I take my anger down

Maybe then you will believe in me

 

Overcoming anger is a relief

For all that believed in me

Thank you for not giving up

Maybe you knew I had just about enough

This world can be rough

But I am just a tough

 

Reviews

[The dark story]

this shows that you've got a very gutsy attitude and a strong will....your aggression and determination is clearly shown this poem.that last two lines..ahhh i like it.

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you i'm honored that you

[Serenity Faith]

It's a strong write, though I would suggest a change to the last line maybe?
suggestion *but I am simply tough*

'But anger is my worst disease' a very sturdy line, my favorite ^_^ Keep up the good work!

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you for being honest

[Serenity Faith]

anytime ^_^