When She Smiles

trying to get someone you know or even i stranger to smile is the best feeling

Why does she have to hide?

There is so much to her on the inside

That she doesn’t want you to know

What lies behind her eyes?

Can bring out her beauty from the outside

So for tonight

Please stop hiding

 

When she smiles

The world begins to have sunlight

It’s hard not to stare at her eyes

But she wants to be unknown

Which I will never understand

But some things can’t be explained

Pleas just give it one chance

 

There’s so much that I want to say to her

But all I can do is write it on paper

I want her to shine

It is what she deserves

So I tell her

 To open up her eyes

Spread her wings and start to fly

 

I hope you know where you’re going

But it doesn’t seem too wrong

She lets her smile show

Like it was never gone

I bless her with so much hope

 

She was once unknown

Now she turned the page

Erased all of her pain

throwing the frowns away

She knows that this is a new day

To begin to fly to a different place

She looks at me with a beautiful smile

And says thank you

And waves me good-bye

Reviews

[Serenity Faith]

The last stanza has a few grammatical errors I caught.
"Through"~threw?
"She looks at my"~She looks at me?
Not anything big as always, and sometimes the best way to word things is by putting those words on paper. I believe this poem will make many people smile ^_^

[Brandon Mathis]

i fixed the grammar errors thanks for pointing them out and thanks for commenting keep reading more if you want to

[Tiffy Yvonne]

nice flow

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you

[The dark story]

ooooooohhhhhh!!!!it's sorely heart touching...

When she smiles
The world begins to have sunlight

this line greatly touched my heart..great work!!!!!!!!!!!

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you very much, i like to know that my poems actually touch peoples, hearts and soul.

[The dark story]

aaaawwww. that's so sad.then you should be aware of it now.YOUR POEMS ARE IMPECCABLE

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you

[The dark story]

you don't have to thanks me for saying the truth:)

[Brandon Mathis]

i no but i always do it for people that deserve it

[The dark story]

hahahaha okay then.... your welcome

[Sir Joe]

I wish all people would wear the smile that she does. (=
Through your words, I was able to visualize the beauty that is in the person that you are referring to.

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you its my wifes fav, prolly caus i wrote it for her

[Sir Joe]

nice! You're so inspired, man. Keep it up. (=

[Brandon Mathis]

i hav like 300 but not all on here