purposefully regretful death

when i saw your cheeks caving in

and your eyes turn to the moon

the darkness taking over

i knew itd be soon

i cant have you for much longer

i pray that what youve seen

has satisfied your heart

and you dont think about what couldve been

Reviews

[Vol]

Ashley,
There is not an ice cubes' chance in hell he won't think about what could have been. It's what men do when we are stating off into space instead of listening...
Well written in every respect, you have good words to give...
Vol