snow

ice beneath my feet.

the bleak, yet serene feeling of desolate cold.

basking in my liberating insignificance

in the face of nature

which shall stay silent as i cry into the void.

Author's Note

last one for tonight. will do some more scouring in my old notes tomorrow (im procrastinating doing uni work)

Reviews

[Soren]

Powerful and metaphoric as well. To me it speaks of isolation and separation. It speaks of cold and void.

[ashley]

thank you sincerely, Soren. that is exactly what i was going for :-) your review means the world

[Sami Khalil]

I felt the power of words and scenery.
Good job.

[ashley]

thank you so so much Sami !!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.