dreams only fester

A Poem by V M Smith

eh.

ignorance may just be bliss
i'll never know
i notice every detail
every flake of snow
every drop of rain
every grain of sand
every time i lie
it reminds my heart i'm mad
this soul you trust
this touch, it's lust
but at least i told you so
before your dreams could grow

© 2013 V M Smith

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I fully appreciate reviews, especially when they tear apart my work in an attempt to make it better. Rip, tea, break it down. Tell me how you do not like it, how to make it better. I want your opinion. Truly.

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Added on March 9, 2008
Last Updated on August 9, 2013

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i'm not a writer; i am a liar. i sometimes write far too specifically; i sometimes write so vague even i lose track of what it is i'm on about. i tend to write when i can't think. this seems to be.. more..