left me wanting

ever really want something?

really want it,
to the point
that it pops into
your mind
at random?

there
while you're
driving.

beside you at
work.

it's there
whether or not
others can
see

but just
out
of
reach.

i want it
to work.

and work
for
years
to come.

Author's Note

I fully appreciate reviews, especially when they tear apart my work in an attempt to make it better. Rip, tea, break it down. Tell me how you do not like it, how to make it better. I want your opinion. Truly.