blue eyed boy

crying left his eyes blue
so blue from tears of you
angels' tears fall on him
but he hasn't any clue

his focus is on nothing
he hides his face from all
so he doesn't have to face it
this life that makes him fall

his lips are red so bright
from biting them each time
to keep tears as you pass him
to help him with his fight

Author's Note

I fully appreciate reviews, especially when they tear apart my work in an attempt to make it better. Rip, tea, break it down. Tell me how you do not like it, how to make it better. I want your opinion. Truly.