The Fading Moonlight

This is about a dream I had a while ago. P.S. What's a limerick?

In the moonlight,

I see your face,

Suspended in time,

Time and Space.

The moonlight fades,

And fades away,

Yet,

Still I see you,

You don't fade away.

Then,

You aren't you,

Instead,

You are the buttery moon. 

Reviews

[Voice]

Wow great use of words I love it and it flows beautifully! Such a wonderful write!!!

Voice

[*PixieKiss*]

oooh, this gives me chills.... its so much hidden emotion behind simple words.... great

[Aislinn Gryffin ((Ashes..]

I LOVE THIS!!! You're a very talented writer. It takes someone special to be able to write about something like a dream and keep it simple, but at the same time let it speak. (If that doesn't make sense to anyone else, I'm sorry. Have mercy, I'm sick.) I really liked the ending.