He will never know

He will never  know

 that I love him

He will never know that

I want to make he happy

As I walk beside he

down the hall all  I see is him with

another girl and  wish with all

I have that I was her. I'm the one

that will never break his heart the way she wil. He will never know that

I dream about him ever night.

He will never know that I love he all

because he is in love with anther girl.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[jennifer little]

i loved reading this great poem

[Sarah]

realy good.
XD

[Ice Girl]

Few typos, but it's really great poem!!!

[No name]

A few grammar mistakes but doesn't change the emotion or point. Nice write.

[paparapapa]

This is really sad. To be in this situation is super hard. But I love the raw emotion that you portrayed in your poem. However, it still needs a little bit of editing and polishing. But still, great job. ;)

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i like it...i can so relate...the only thing is you have a few grammar and spelling errors but besides that awesome poem

[*skittlez*]

o love this poem i can relate to this alot

[Samantha]

A few gramatical errors but still very touching and sad

[a]

Its great but form needs a little work.

[Dupree]

This could be better both in form and grammatically, but it's good. Shaort and simplistic yet it tells it's story with ease