Love Me?

Something I came up with at 2-3 AM

I want a love that’s true

Something between just me and you

 

So sweep me off my feet

And hold me when I weep

 

Listen to my heart

As it skips a beat

 

You can be my Mozart

And I’ll be your beautiful symphony

 

Don’t be afraid to take me by the hand

Show me that you can be my man

 

Lets dance in the rain

And kiss away our pain

 

Lets run like we are wild and free

I’ll play hard to get and you can chase me

 

I want to feel a love so real and alive

Promise you’ll always be by my side?

 

Come with me and count the stars

And together we’ll heal the scars

Reviews

[Blogger]

This sounds nice. You did a good job of maintaining the rhyming along with the romantic feel.

[melissa]

i liked this a lot good work

[Eagle Cruagh]

Absolutely sensational !

[lostmymarbles487]

oh how i want something like this. but so far i've missed. just like you we are all searching. i liked your rhymes but it seemed kind of shallow. don't let the critics get you down though and keep on writing and searching for "the one"

[Lissianna]

I actually found him but thanks ^.^