You Belong To Me

Poem I wrote when I randomly spaced out

The moon is bright
And voices are calling
The chilling abyss makes me fear falling

Sturdy trees
And steady seas
I wish to be wild and free

Rattling windows
And summer storms
My inner demons I shall not mourn

Heed my call
And hold me tight
Mother moon be my guiding light

Whispered lullaby's
And hushed pleas
You forever belong to me

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

If spacing out gets poetry like this to flow outward onto the page, then...by all means... Space out more often! =) This was really good. It has a smooth flow to it and really blossoms the feeling of an embrace on the soul. Kinda like when you're staring out the window in the middle of the day and can't go outside, you begin to daydream about that perfect savior flying in on a ray of light. They sweep you away into a grand journey, but this overall feeling of safety washes over ya... kinda like that.

Wonderful Ink! Much enjoyed!
Aaron - Wolfwind

[Blogger]

I feel myself walking along lost in dense woods when reading this. I like to picture things when reading....

[Wórdsmíth]

Very sweet poem. Our loneliness makes us all to write such pieces of freedom. I love reading this poem.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Is about something that is trying to say

I confess without shame that I have the intention
to hijack your dreams
if no exceptions being the only invader

[Richard]

Oh it's so simple and breezy it's refreshing I loved it

[Rahul]

I got the nice life message your expressed through this poem. I loved this, sometimes Random things're seem good thinking about the life alone. All stanzas are powerful and written with your deep meanings. I get a new or an other view looking at the life differently from here. Thank your once again making this piece. I'm glad reading your stuffs. Your stuffs're making me cool down from my stress indeed. It's really beautifully written.