Twelve Words

For the 12 words contest.

Life is:
tragedy,
 like this piece.


It ends before you say:
"Forgive---"

Author's Note

damn....a few words to short.

Reviews

[Elephant Noses]

Well done! A lot of possible interpretations and meaning compacted into a tight little space of 12 words

[nothing]

Very clever. You did an awesome job. I really liked it.

Sarah.

[Graceful]

it was amazing!

[Tina Kline]

Better to say "I forgive" before its too late. You did a really nice job on this, direct and too the point.

[Alexa Tasch]

very unique. it is really good and simple. good luck with the contest

perfect topic with perfect shock inside

[Matthew Kult]

This was very creative, and tragic at the same time.

Great write,

With Love,

Jaidyn