Our story.

well...

Its our story...

 

She saw you first.

 

She's a cutie, but a little too sad.

 

Even in the beauty she has.

 

So hey there...stop your crying.

 

Come on for me. At least keep trying.

 

I'll clean those tears from that beautifal face.

 

Let's run for this happiness and continue the chase.

 

She has had a 100 heartbreaks.

 

The love I give are you willing to take?

 

So heads beat and chances are dead.

 

Try to think of everything said.

 

With tears in the rain and silence dancing below the clouds.

 

It was perfect for our love to be found.

 

Smiles I make to hide frowns you don't show.

 

What you have inside is best to be known.

 

The love that is left.

 

It was for the best.

Author's Note

little longer then most but i like it.

Reviews

[princessmewmew]

it is very pretty

[I Am Svetlana]

Aw, this was so cute! It was kind of like a fairytale to me and it made me smile. Sure, the girl had 100th heartbreak, but you were there to make her first heartmake! I liked the flow and rhyme of it as well and how it all fit together in the end.

[Dizzy]

Longer yes but perfect I like this one a lot.

My favorite line;
"With tears in the rain and silence dancing below the clouds.
It was perfect for our love to be found."
Very nice imagery.
Excellent job on the detail, as well.