Target.

I'm the one you look down on, but is always up.

I got it all, but thats never enough.

 

 

You bend the rules, then I break them

You call out the fools, then I embrace them.

 

 

Now cover up our status, I feel like I have this.

 

You bring the money, then I bring the fear.

You bring the low life's, then I bring the tears.

 

Your hearts' next on my list, so prepare for pieces and bits.

 

 

Reviews

[OT]

I like the juxtapositions here!! very topsy turvy and up and down like, which is good!!! great poem!

[Marie Harrison]

What a rollercoaster poem. I enjoyed the contrasting theme. Great stuff!

[Frank F. Atanacio]

Your hearts' next on my list, so prepare for pieces and bits.


great write but I love the last line :)