Nonsense

Don't really got an explanation

       Simple and quiet a moutain crumbled in front of you..

a bird with no feathers fell from the sky..

       a chest with no treasure found in the sea..

 

     Swollen eyes from the dew..

a useless dress over sized..

      What can you find in me..

 

          I came from some where,

                             you've never heard of before..

           Cover your ears up..

 

     Simple and quiet i blew down our only moutain..

I killed a bird with my glance to the sky..

    I discvoered all the treasure..

      These allergies are one of my problems

these girls are never just right

        I can't find anything in me... to relate to.

            

         I came from no where,

              and you've never heard something like this before..

                      This nonsense will just fool you into being a

 

fool.

 

Reviews

[S Sanders]

Welp, I dig the first four stanzas, but since you don't have an explanation, I can only use my interpretation for the last one. And hey, that kind of rhymes:-) Seriously, I like the way it starts out and then reverses.

[Ruth]

WOW! This is amazing love! The metaphorical content here is sublime.......I am blessed to have this piece, awesome! xx

[TJ]

wow man this was great! the imagery was amazing, i could really picture this stuff in my head! i really liked the format! it flowed really well and had a little bit of a rhythm to it! and the emotion was great, it seemed to have a self-loathing feel, like the narrator thinks he causes all the problems in his life/relationships and he doesn't deserve anyone.
i liked it