Shelter me cold.

 

Please don't ask, I'm not doing so good.

That same "O" feeling of, I knew you would.

This shelter seems a bit cold.

I'd rather freeze then die alone.

How I wish you knew my story.

I wish I still had those dreams of glory.

Yet' I regret all these wrong turns,

I must have missed that lesson never leanred.

Please don't tell me, what you think.

That feeling tires away with the hurt you bring.

This life don't seem to fair.

I'd rather die then live down here.

I regret where I ended up,

As time slips away with every drug.

I wish you knew my story,

How I wish I still had those dreams of glory.

Reviews

[Emberlorna]

Love the last 5 lines. Good job!

[Adam :P]

i got a lot of grammar to work on lol. not to good at grammar thanks!

[Clarisse Nanoit]

Interesting, for sure. There are a few spelling mistakes, but it still tells a sad story. I'm still thinking on this one--very intriguing.
KH
P.S. Thanks for that review earlier. lol