To soon

We waited for the end we headed back to then
Beat our self to death, committed every theft
Never made it to, Never knew the truth
Made every move, Moved to soon.
Bottled it all in.
We bottled it all in..
we bottled it all in

Wasted every minute, spent more time spinning,
Broke every limit, left the mark to end it.
Always had the best, even as we rest
Made every move, Moved to soon.
Bottled it all in.
We bottled it all in..
we bottled it all in

Bottled it all in..


We moved a little to soon..

Reviews

[Tasha]

I could feel all your emotions in this, it flowed very well and I was greatly moved by it. Wonderful write.

[Emberlorna]

I was really moved by this piece. Anger, sadness, chaos, loss, regret and so many emotions flow in this. Great write :}