Embrace

Embrace

A Poem by Brandee D. Hack

Warmth encompasses your heart
but ice is mine's true fire.
The heat started burning
and now steam is shown.

One never knows
what actions it can cause.
To be alone late
with dust glazing the lake.

But I think of your wings
they shatter all the power.
Of everything I once knew
shattered at one glance.

I wish that I could see
your warm embrace,
The lovely brown eyes you have
send chills through my spine.

I never know what to expect
this heart it seems so torn.
I know what I want
but I seem to always want more.

The dream I want to see,
it stares me in the face.
Only time will tell
my heart's amazing grace.

© 2010 Brandee D. Hack


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A beautiful poem of love and emotion. When someone can set on heart on fire. A very good day. Description and your story was excellent. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 16 Years Ago


Lovely poem. About love gained and lost, is the way I interpret it.

We all need to feel the embrace and the comfort and warmth of another human being.

Posted 16 Years Ago


YOUR POETRY SENDS CHILLS DOWN MY SPINE.
HI BRANDEE IT'S COLIN AGAIN!
I AM SO SORRY - I MAY HAVE GIVEN YOU THE WRONG ADDRESS - PLEASE FORGIVE ME BECAUSE I STILL PLAY THIS IRISH HARP FOR YOU - THE RIGHT ADDRESS IS: thepoeticminds.ning.com
(poetry,literature and dreams) AND WE HAVE A WONDEFUL INTERNATIONAL COMMUNITY OF WRITERS AND ARTISTS - PLEASE FEEL FREE TO JOIN US - WOULD YOU?

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Brandee D. Hack
Brandee D. Hack

Ireland Co.



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Hello all. My name is Brandee. I have wrote many different genres of writings for many years. I hope that by putting it up that that will help me get some feedback and constructive criticism. .. more..