I've seen that Face

Him and Her.

I've just seen the face of her. Then the way he walks...it makes me think. She weighs heavy on my mind. Yet he is the most amazing person I have ever met. She loves when I speak sweet lullaby's to her. He loves when I watch the stars flost by and graze the air, just laying on our picnic blanket together. She loves to tell me Je taime mon cheri. He tells me I make him the most happiest man in the world. She teases me with her long lock's flowing down her back. He tempts me with his sweet laughter, it just simply makes a sparkling and serendipidous moment that could last forever.

 

...and you are in my heart.

Reviews

[Philip S.]

It feels devious... :) I like the two first sentences, how it immediately smashed the two loves together providing the 'mystery' from the start.

[Ladysue]

This was soft and blissful. I agree with coyote the tense confused me at first, but I got use to it. Overall a very romantic and beautiful piece of writing...

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is very beautiful. I like the kind and gentle story in your words. The tenses confuse me. But I like the desire and love in your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote