Mirage

Mirage

A Poem by breaking_heart

Mirage

I'm drowning
You're running to save me
Wait, where are you going?
You're fading, disappearing 
A mirage
You werent really there
But I'm really drowning, thinking that you were

© 2015 breaking_heart


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Those mirage can make us wish for things we cannot have. A well-written poem with good story and honest ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Extremely painful.

Now, get up early tomorrow morning, while its still dark, and find a vantage point with a good view of the eastern Ontario sky, out towards Oshawa.
Watch the stars fade out into a sunrise; watch all the colors of the new dawn, whether they be grays or reds or pinks or oranges. No matter what they are, enjoy them.
Write me a poem about them. Write me a poem about the birth of a new day. Write me a poem about how we have the privilege of being re-born everyday, how we have the chance to re-invent ourselves everyday.
Then go out and watch the sun sink low, over towards London or Sarnia, and write me a poem about the joy in life that you saw today because you made a conscious effort to go out and find it, and tell me what the sky looked like at sunset. Tell me the colors, make me feel that I am there with you.
And then tell me what you'll do tomorrow...
...for every sunset leads to a new dawn, a new day, and the chance to be a new you.
Look forward. Look through the fire of the pain, for on the other side is a new day. It is up to you to decide to put one foot in front of the other...
...and watch every tomorrow being born.
That is God's gift to us: The promise of a new day, and the chance to become a new person.
Enjoy it always.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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breaking_heart

Toronto, Canada



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I am going through a hard time and decided to write. I'm not a good writer. I'm 15, so I'm not too experienced. My punctuation will be sloppy. Same with my grammar. Please excuse that. Thank you more..