Cry

People cry,

Not because they're weak

They've just been strong for too long

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Bravo! It's as though Octavio Paz handed you his pen!

Regards,
Al

[Tomm Kanti]

First off, you make me think of Chuck Norris. Chuck Norris doesn't have to cry, but Chuck Norris wants the world to know it's okay to cry. That's automatic 30 points in the Rating meter.

Short and sweet, that's 15 points. Another 15 points for sarcasm.

Content and tags get you another 10 points. Good Job, I give you a 70 out of 100.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

excellent...such perfect insight in three short lines.

[Cory Barrett]

yeah.... that was tight..........

[MsJewel]

You have said so much in so few words. Well done.

:) Julie

[Valentine]

Sounds like hundreds of people's feelings. Kudos. Valentine

[Neythan Cardoso]

didn't even have to fill a page to get the point across. love it.

[Lyingwithlions]

Very true. This says so much in just three little lines.

[Cat]

Wonderful. A different take on vulnerability.

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. We need to release sadness and tears. Very good use of words. You are a good writing. Hard to make your point using so few words. You can. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote