Just A Dream

This is part of a song my friends and I wrote two years ago.

I miss your laugh

I miss your smile

But I also miss mine too

You make me so happy

I'm so lonely

I'm so helpless

All the memories we held

Our fancy dinners

Late night movies

And suddenly we fell

Reviews

[Lyingwithlions]

Thank you for sharing. Very nice, I would like to hear or read the rest of the lyrics for sure.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poetry. I like the poetry that leave the reader with a open ending. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the sad ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[terry smith]

Nice,but it feels unfinished...maybe it's supposed to.

[breaking_heart]

It's part of a song that my friends and I wrote a few years ago

[hanir]

I like this piece. Nicely written.