Making Me Stronger

I was heart broken recently, but I think I'm learning to move past it.

They say love is a game, yet I play it

Thinking I'm too young to be feeling this

My emotions are here, there, let them sit

On the emotion I want, which is bliss

 

I think I should have run from here

It's a scary feeling of being used

Yet I still hold on to memories near

It feels like I've had no chance to pursue

 

My dreams of chaos and greatness and love

They all ceased once you walked into my life

Providing my love nerve that extra shove

I dislike dealing with internal strife

 

I play this game because you broke my heart

Yet it's time for emotions to part.

Author's Note

Hmm? How is it? Could be better probably, this is the latest draft I have, may fix and tweak a little more later.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

When love is a game. It isn't love. It is only hunger and desire to use and abuse then run away. When love is true. It is a permanent mark on heart and mind. A strong poem. Life and love pain will teach us to be wiser. Real love will make you crazy and only content in the vision of the one you love. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[CharlesMonroe]

I'm so sorry you feel this way ): you donht deserve it. Nobody does. The poem is very good though, your emotions poored through. I love it (:
100/100

[brenda]

its good like i said before let me get yuou more reviewers!!:)