Well, I Just Suck

Seems like I’m the one who always f***s up

I’m sorry I’m not like the rest of you

Perfect, great, wonderful, and all grownup

I apologize I’m not that way too

 

It seems like I’m the only one that’s wrong

It must be true because it’s always me

Your lives have been like a beautiful song

And then all the false melodies you see

 

I just happen to ruin everything

I do, I have, and will forever more

Seems like with me, your team will never win

So what exactly is my life worth for?

 

Can you even tell me why I am here?

Obviously not because you hold me dear.

Author's Note

Yeah, this is how my family makes me feel.

Reviews

[Relic]

I've been there I know. Its like a curse that was only put on you and no one else. Hope things are better now. I see the date you posted. :)

[Jazique]

Well I'll admit never felt that way when it comes to my family but, I have felt that way in other places. I remind myself though just someone does not need me in their life does not mean someone out there doesn't. Even if they don't even know me. Anyways well done. I did feel like it was missing somethig to have it flow a little more when you read it but, I am not sure what. Besides emotions themselves are a little choppy. As for the means and the words you expressed they were great though. Title fits perfectly, for the work not you. Anyways well done, can't wait to read what other writngs you have.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I love you for what you are!
That' the only truth there is!
You are precious to me!

[Suzy Q]

Aw, thank you so much :3

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Note that I said that in the wide-open....
Not in your inbox
I'm just a sheep in my clothing not a sly fox:)

[PossiblyAlice]

The emotional is very clear, its very beautiful

[Eile MacIntyre]

You express it well with words. Good work.

[dreaming dame]

Yea, this is how my friends make me feel. :( But this is an amazing write. :) well done

[Shep]

I wrote a poem titled Square Peg. Runs on the same lines of this poem. We are all different , normal is overrated.

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong and honest poetry. I like the directness and emotion of the words. Hard to be a kid. So many questions needing answers. I like the strong ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

You have penned these emotions brilliantly........bravo