Made of Glass

Crowded hallways,

Loud rooms.

People talking,

Love blooms.

Quiet smiles,

Sweet laughs,

All unnoticed,

All surpassed.

Small and fragile,

Eyes with sheen,

Always looked at,

Never seen. 

In the backdrop,

Always last.

Stands the girl,

That’s made of glass.  

Reviews

[pablo]

Wonderful. Thank you for this.

[Genevive]

Wow! This is fantastic writing

[Marie]

This is sweet and sad...original too...a girl made of glass...

[Between the grey]

wonderful write here, enjoyable to read.

[Sean]

Great job! I second Subway's remark, brilliant use of imagery.

[eatmills]

Brilliant piece of work. Loved the imagery. Thanks for the share.